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I Am

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i am a slug who will melt under salt.
  an inquisitive child.
i wonder why salt melts slugs.
  when did i learn the word inquisitive?
i feel rain, Gods tears.
  did someone Good die?
i look at the rising moon.
i want to sit on it and fish for answers
to questions unasked.

i am a slug who will melt under salt,
an inquisitive child.

i pretend i am alone.
i feel swallowed in a sea of smiles.
i touch the darkness soon to submerge me.
i worry that ill never get answers.
i cry for the answers already in my heart.

i am a slug who will melt under salt.
an inquisitive child.

i understand some answers can be hard pills to swallow.
reality is a pill swallowed alot.
i dont want to be all-knowing,
but ignorance is no synonym for bliss.
written for creative writing class
© 2012 - 2024 SamiSalsa
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The-Kid-Who-Screams's avatar
sam you've gotten better from the last time I checked. Honestly, I don't see many literature pieces that jump out at me anymore, especially the fancy ones with the over decorative words. Your simple pieces always catch my eye and I love them. I hardly bother to take the time to read or fav things here anymore, as I'm a busy man now, so it's actually a big deal that your awesomeness has forced my ass to become active on numerous occasions. Keep up the good work. Btw, I miss you don't ya know? I miss you all. You guys never left my mind.